Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


I'm lost in the darkness.. never to be found
I sit in the corner of this room, not making a sound
Never to be heard of... never to be noticed
Am i crazy? Or just focused.
Voices in my head... telling me I'm alright
That I wont go down without a fight
They tell me I'm safe here
And there is nothing to fear

I believe them, so i sit alone in this dark room
Possibly sitting to my doom
But whenever i get lonely
I think if only..if only
I had a light...
to tear me from this aweful night...
Has day come? How would i know...
The windows are gone so air could not flow.

Im trapped in my own mind
If you could... could you be so kind...
End my suffering.. and end my life
With a swift slash of that cold knife...
©2005-2009 ~Taterrex
:icontaterrex:

Author's Comments

I dunno what inspired this one but it just seemed to flow when i started writing it

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconcall-me-your-star:
wow. i can really relate to this, this is great :-D great work xx

--
hi
:iconmysterypain:
I really like it. The only thing you seemed not to have noticed was the several spelling mistakes! Otherwise I really like it!

--
- Mira
:icontheforgotten87:
i quite like it..well doneits easy to relate to + check typos
:iconmannequeen1984:
rather angst but i love it because it's dark and it has a perfect PERFECT flow to it
:iconyou-broke-it:
there are typos but other then that it was amazing... i love the idea, i love the flow... it was pretty much all around good

--
I will not bend
:icontaterrex:
oh thanks! Ill get those fixed right away :)
:icontaterrex:
ya i got some spelling mistakes i bet i had to use notepad >.> i dont got any spellcheck haha
:icontaterrex:
thanks :) not bad for a third poem i guess wheeee
:icontaterrex:
yay! thanks so much! :)

Details

August 14, 2005
922 bytes

Statistics

39
2 [who?]
53 (0 today)
7 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map